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A call for artful erotic poetry and prose

Vanderghast Kavka
"made to be rushed"
Join date: 9 Jun 2006
Posts: 4
09-03-2006 12:57
In this audacious second world, celebrated for its spectacular creativity and notorious for its surging sexuality, there must be plenty of SL resident poets and prose writers producing artful expressions on erotic themes.

Perhaps we could start a wiki-like thread where writers could freely post artistic written material. Others could then comment, criticize, and propose changes to creations in the hope that we might, more or less together, produce an interesting work or two. Contributors could, when possible, accompany comments with their own original work, so that we could grow content exponentially. Events organizers would also be welcome to encourage writers to participate with ongoing projects.

To kick it off, here’s the first draft of two works. No doubt they could use some work…
One was inspired by a gentle lady, the other by a mystifying one.

Abode of love

In an other-worldly dream, Guapa called to me. Instantly we were in an abode of love. She took me, fast and sure, from one delight to another, never tiring of caress. And as she engulfed my mind in emotions, powerful reveries possessed me. Sweet heat!

Her gentle nature welcomed me as a friend. Her kindness was at first overwhelming, making me doubt her for a while. Then, from a heartfelt utterance in reply to an insincerity of mine, I glimpsed her soul of utter beauty.

Her voracious love made me pursue her more, and I felt a wretch for it. Yet tenderness was her answer, there amidst the storm, and her honesty made me love her.

Felina Obscura

Gives herself when others take, hugs again where others break
Laughs aloud though others cry, dreams awake while others sigh
Felina Obscura must obey

Quiet struggling in the night, darkly viewing out of sight
Strongly wields a voice too clear, thoughts are hidden in a tear
Felina Obscura must obey

Heart that’s prone to bleed anew, body soaked in lover’s dew
Mind that’s deep, alive and proud, whispers “yes” within a cloud
Felina Obscura must obey

Vander
“Made to be rushed.”
Bianca Gonzales
Registered User
Join date: 18 Jul 2006
Posts: 1
09-05-2006 08:25
Both good short poems-but Vander darling It is the second which I find more beautiful and eye catching. It lets you really visualize in your mind what is going on. sexy . keep it up.
Junko Yeuxdoux
Registered User
Join date: 1 Sep 2006
Posts: 2
sensual poetry
09-08-2006 05:57
Amazing to see what the sex oppertunities are in Second Life. Your poetry adds to the fantasies that one can outlive on line. Keep creating for the mind and body.
Vanderghast Kavka
"made to be rushed"
Join date: 9 Jun 2006
Posts: 4
Second of the Felina BDSM twin poems
09-08-2006 14:00
Thanks for the comments! Here's the matching poem to the original post involving the Mistress-pet relationship:

Felina Lumina

A fallen leaf lies trembling at her feet, Felina’s mind is rapt with pleasure heat
She crushes will but leaves the heart full well, my Mistress care is brutal sweet from hell
Felina Lumina will command

She loves her slaves for hours in the night, Felina’s blossoms wilt without a fight
Yet come again to pluck her passion deep, and take her bonds upon them as in sleep
Felina Lumina will command

A fleeting whimper chokes without a cure, she forces pet with unrelenting lure
Felina’s body struts with power lace, secretes her love upon her angel’s face
Felina Lumina will command

/me smiles. Please feel free to add your own material!
Vander
"Made to be rushed."