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Jack Skallagrimson
バナナの電話!
Join date: 17 Jul 2003
Posts: 63
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11-18-2003 13:51
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Dionysus Starseeker
Mostly Harmless
Join date: 31 Dec 1969
Posts: 764
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11-18-2003 13:57
This would've been a great story, but I feel the protagonist was not truly motivated by the spirit of the old man, but actually by the wings of a pegasus... a yellow pegasus. In all my years of writing, I've never seen misinformation such as this. It is aquamarine and broken and flatulant and spligsday, and none of those are good things to be. I give it a 526.
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Cyanide Leviathan
Xtreme Loser Squad
Join date: 12 Jun 2003
Posts: 408
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11-20-2003 05:45
HAhahahahahahahahehehehehehehehahahahah LOL even
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