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Randy Strangelove

The Last Romantic Poet

Join date: 23 Nov 2005

Posts: 13

01-05-2006 00:46

( No Title )

Why can’t you see the desperation
As tears of fear run down my face,
I’m searching deep for information
To cry aloud is no disgrace.

Don’t speak to me about tomorrow
Cause I won’t want to understand,
My yesterday’s are filled with sorrow
Another card dealt underhand.

I suffer from this fake illusion
I’m left alone in selfish ways,
But I can’t find no just conclusion
To guide me through these stormy days.

Contemporary thoughts alive with fire
Float further down unconscious seas,
Sweet memories they take me higher
But bitter tears outsell my pleas.

My soul is chained in sweet seclusion
A mask of death entwines my face,
I wait in fear for Gods effusion
To find my final resting place.

Any idea's for a title would be appreciated Thx.

Bertha Horton

Fat w/ Ice Cream

Join date: 19 Sep 2005

Posts: 835

01-05-2006 01:57

"Angst and Anguish"

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Trapped in a world she never made!

Taco Rubio

also quite creepy

Join date: 15 Feb 2004

Posts: 3,349

01-05-2006 07:49

Sunshine Lollipop

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From: Torley Linden

We can't be clear enough, ever, in our communication.

Joy Honey

Not just another dumass

Join date: 17 Jun 2005

Posts: 3,751

01-05-2006 07:53

From: Taco Rubio

Sunshine Lollipop

ohhhh thanks for that

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Reality continues to ruin my life. - Calvin

You have delighted us long enough. - Jane Austen

Sometimes I need what only you can provide: your absence. - Ashleigh Brilliant

JackBurton Faulkland

PorkChop Express

Join date: 3 Sep 2005

Posts: 478

01-05-2006 08:20

how bout: "my panties are too tight"

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You know what Jack Burton always says... what the hell?

AJ DaSilva

woz ere

Join date: 15 Jun 2005

Posts: 1,993

01-05-2006 09:14

I always like to give things titles that alludes to, but don't specifically say, what a piece is about or written in reaction to - i.e. using the initial(s) of a person.

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Paolo Portocarrero

Puritanical Hedonist

Join date: 28 Apr 2004

Posts: 2,393

01-05-2006 10:08

Riddles from the Existential Abyss

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Facades by Paolo - Photo-Realistic Skins for Doods
> Flagship store, Santo Paolo's Lofts & Boutiques
> SLBoutique

Cid Jacobs

Theoretical Meteorologist

Join date: 18 Jul 2004

Posts: 4,304

01-05-2006 10:59

Outward Expression of Inner Turmoil

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Billy Grace

Land Market Facilitator

Join date: 8 Mar 2004

Posts: 2,307

01-05-2006 11:22

I like the one it has... "No Title" Kinda has a ring to it.

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I find it rather easy to portray a businessman. Being bland, rather cruel and incompetent comes naturally to me.
John Cleese, 1939 -

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Randy Strangelove The Last Romantic Poet Join date: 23 Nov 2005 Posts: 13	01-05-2006 00:46 ( No Title ) Why can’t you see the desperation As tears of fear run down my face, I’m searching deep for information To cry aloud is no disgrace. Don’t speak to me about tomorrow Cause I won’t want to understand, My yesterday’s are filled with sorrow Another card dealt underhand. I suffer from this fake illusion I’m left alone in selfish ways, But I can’t find no just conclusion To guide me through these stormy days. Contemporary thoughts alive with fire Float further down unconscious seas, Sweet memories they take me higher But bitter tears outsell my pleas. My soul is chained in sweet seclusion A mask of death entwines my face, I wait in fear for Gods effusion To find my final resting place. Any idea's for a title would be appreciated Thx.
Bertha Horton Fat w/ Ice Cream Join date: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 835	01-05-2006 01:57 "Angst and Anguish" _____________________ Trapped in a world she never made!
Taco Rubio also quite creepy Join date: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 3,349	01-05-2006 07:49 Sunshine Lollipop _____________________ From: Torley Linden We can't be clear enough, ever, in our communication.
Joy Honey Not just another dumass Join date: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 3,751	01-05-2006 07:53 From: Taco Rubio Sunshine Lollipop ohhhh thanks for that _____________________ Reality continues to ruin my life. - Calvin You have delighted us long enough. - Jane Austen Sometimes I need what only you can provide: your absence. - Ashleigh Brilliant
JackBurton Faulkland PorkChop Express Join date: 3 Sep 2005 Posts: 478	01-05-2006 08:20 how bout: "my panties are too tight" _____________________ You know what Jack Burton always says... what the hell?
AJ DaSilva woz ere Join date: 15 Jun 2005 Posts: 1,993	01-05-2006 09:14 I always like to give things titles that alludes to, but don't specifically say, what a piece is about or written in reaction to - i.e. using the initial(s) of a person. _____________________
Paolo Portocarrero Puritanical Hedonist Join date: 28 Apr 2004 Posts: 2,393	01-05-2006 10:08 Riddles from the Existential Abyss _____________________ Facades by Paolo - Photo-Realistic Skins for Doods > Flagship store, Santo Paolo's Lofts & Boutiques > SLBoutique
Cid Jacobs Theoretical Meteorologist Join date: 18 Jul 2004 Posts: 4,304	01-05-2006 10:59 Outward Expression of Inner Turmoil _____________________
Billy Grace Land Market Facilitator Join date: 8 Mar 2004 Posts: 2,307	01-05-2006 11:22 I like the one it has... "No Title" Kinda has a ring to it. _____________________ I find it rather easy to portray a businessman. Being bland, rather cruel and incompetent comes naturally to me. John Cleese, 1939 -