Can i give something away?

i guess i should have posted this request in a different forum, the way it was stated appears to be advertising.

so let me start over, try again....

i made something, and i would love it if someone would come around and critique it and give me some advice that would make it a little better.

if you want something in exchange for your time and advice, i am gladly dolling out 'space'.

perhaps 'wrong location' will be your advice. or, put more of _____ in there. or even, take out that _____! whatever your advice is, i would simply appreciate a 2nd opinion and 3rd eye.

to be true to the RA format, my question about my build is.... while i have nothing new to offer in the way if ingenius SL inventions, and i don't choose to duplicate others' work, does my creation bring something new to SL or is it just same ol same ol?

please IM inworld if interested. i'll be inworld later today to follow up. thanks.

Sure, but I may not make it game today for very long but I'll IM today and be there tomorrow. No space for me, please. Just a don't orbit and ban me like most women do.

Aw, we don't orbit and ban you, Yo-yo!

We freeze you first.

What is a raised portion of road designed to slow traffic call?

Around here?

A deer.

3Ring, I'd be happy to give my opinion, with no expectations of anything in return. I'm not inworld today, but will be on and off tomorrow. Hopefully I'll remember by then to IM you.

Off Topic, Sorry: BTW I tried to send you a PM today but you have it turned off. I didn't forget about you re: my land. I wound up selling it, and made a decent profit off of it but thanks so much for all the help you gave me; and for being interested in renting or buying it as well

From 3Ring's post in the marriage thread; ban and orbit are the least of your worries. It made me hurt just reading about it...

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HAHA!

I was thinking more like "a bump"

i dropped you a landmark to the place i made. walk around and let me know what seems out of place. i think it came out really nice, i LOVE the beavers. but, it feels "flat" to me. i can't figure out what i need to make it "POP!"

thanks ever so much!!!

In England it is called a 'sleeping policeman'.

http://www.rediweld.co.uk/traffic/sitecop.asp

Or a pedestrian, depending on rural/urban usage

I'd love it if you'd drop me a landmark to the place inworld, 3ring...

I realize you don't know me from adam- but-

I like lookin' at stuff.

Is it in your picks? I would like to check it out.

EDIT: Found it! I'll talk with you more about it later, but for now I'm giving two thumbs up.

thanks fellow office supply.

Muse, thank you for so much advice. i feel somewhat attached to the walkway, but i'm searching for something that will give me that earthy, mossy feel.... but much lighter. wut do you think about that idea? i'll need to make time, which is not exactly possible right now. seems like one RL crisis after another lately, and i'm gonna end up in the loony bin. send me an IM as soon as you are ready so i can help you get set up.

i probably won't be inworld for a few days now, so if you are willing to hunt me down and search my picks, it's there. i hope you enjoy the scenery.

Dekka got there first....