Need more practice? (built half a city)
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Chaos Bikcin
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09-19-2007 22:13
what do u lot think of this, do i need more practise building, or shal i continue to build this city, it will be a dark RP, chill out place, with shops, clubs, a pub, competitions, shopping cart racing and loads more kool stuff heres the pics http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/5763/image1ly6.jpghttp://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1358/image2nm3.jpghttp://img225.imageshack.us/img225/4105/image3mi5.jpghttp://img512.imageshack.us/img512/1250/image4no5.jpgIf anyones up4 an explore, go to the main map and type in "Felonhall" (without the quotes) there are 18 flats, 8 shops and a few spaces to rent, its not finished yet, there is one open club and one being built, have a look around and tell me what u think. cheerz |
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Nina Stepford
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09-19-2007 22:30
i think it looks pretty good.
i vote 'keep at it'.
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Jax Jevon
There ya go !
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09-19-2007 22:33
Stay at it mate .. great build .. very atmospheric.
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IsabellaRosa Capalini
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09-19-2007 22:47
another vote for stay at it! , it looks great when i'm in world, i'll stop by for a visit  |
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Ri Rasmuson
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09-19-2007 22:56
Looks great. Definitely be dropping by later for a look.
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Katryna Jie
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09-20-2007 00:27
Looks good! Have to admit, I think someone has taken me through there before. The name rings a bell, and the style is familiar.
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Marty Starbrook
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09-20-2007 03:33
looks quite depressing to me ..... so well done ...
Excellent textures good atmosphere.... nice work mate
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Jezabell Barbosa
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09-20-2007 03:39
Looks fantastic!
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Tegg Bode
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09-20-2007 03:41
Looks good
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Jesseaitui Petion
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09-20-2007 03:49
LOL! You have a build that doesnt look like some noob built it, shadowings, nice texturing..and youre asking if you need more practice? Sounds like a pretext to me; Should have only asked what we think  *dodges the sticks, rocks, and sharp pointy objects being thrown at him*
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Dekka Raymaker
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09-20-2007 05:14
get some hair?
it looks very good, however last shot of the room, is the ceiling high enough, but then i guess it depends what that room is for. get someone to walk round, not a friend, so they can say how easy it is to negotiate, open doors, fly down the street if flying is allowed, and check out how quickly walls and ceilings zoom in on you when your inside, just a suggestion.
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Michael Bigwig
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09-20-2007 06:09
Yup...looks good to me. Just add some dramatic lighting and shadow maps, and it will come to life.
Perhaps a little litter as well.
Good start.
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Grey Lock
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09-20-2007 06:17
Nicely done... the first picture especially reminded me of the game Half-Life... half expected a head crab to jump out at at me while viewing the pictures. Heheheheh.
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Chaos Bikcin
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09-20-2007 09:43
Cheerz guys, I'm gonna make it look a little darker, does anyone have an automatic force sun script?? or know where i can get one?
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Rhaorth Antonelli
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09-20-2007 09:48
nice job
makes me think I need to work on some variety in my city with textures and such
although I do have a passion for brick and the city reflects that
and highrises
and trains
LOL
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Dekka Raymaker
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09-20-2007 09:49
If you own the SIM and it's private you set sun to all the time, is that what you meant?
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Chaos Bikcin
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09-20-2007 09:54
From: Dekka Raymaker If you own the SIM and it's private you set sun to all the time, is that what you meant? No its not its on the mainland, that new continent, i know there's a script somewhere that sets the position of the sun, i've seen it on other mainland sims |
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Dekka Raymaker
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09-20-2007 10:10
ok just a little criticism here, imo the ceiling heights are too low, in the tenant block walking up the stairs give a real uncomfortable feeling, you also see the next floor above as the floor kind of disappears, also don't slack with your texturing, make sure all sides have a texture, again walking up the stairs I can see lots of default wood, which in theory you shouldn't see but you do, that really spoils it for me. Also being really an*l there are a few gaps around, floors to walls etc.
The texture is generally good, but again a few places could improve, especially the park base texture on the floor, it's a big big in proportion.
However, with exception to the above, I'd be happy if I'd built something like that.
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Chaos Bikcin
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09-20-2007 11:58
From: Dekka Raymaker ok just a little criticism here, imo the ceiling heights are too low, in the tenant block walking up the stairs give a real uncomfortable feeling, you also see the next floor above as the floor kind of disappears, also don't slack with your texturing, make sure all sides have a texture, again walking up the stairs I can see lots of default wood, which in theory you shouldn't see but you do, that really spoils it for me. Also being really an*l there are a few gaps around, floors to walls etc.
The texture is generally good, but again a few places could improve, especially the park base texture on the floor, it's a big big in proportion.
However, with exception to the above, I'd be happy if I'd built something like that. Cheerz i will have a look at the default wood texture, as for the ceilings, there ment to be low, and its ment to feel uncomfortable, thats how it was designed,lol |
