A haiku!
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Rudolph Ormsby
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12-28-2008 09:13
My favourite haiku, inspired by good times in SL, albeit from two years ago:
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Tuscan blossoms sleep
Blooming with glory and Thou
... An eternity.
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Is there a haiku in you, inspired by SL?
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Amaranthim Talon
Voyager, Seeker, Curious
Join date: 14 Nov 2006
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12-28-2008 09:20
Not my forte- but I try:
Silver frosts shimmer
Souls touch across the distance
Time stands still tonight
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Longest Aeon
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Join date: 18 Aug 2008
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12-28-2008 09:28
My heart still with you
Never dulled by the silence
Until death parts us
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Rudolph Ormsby
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12-28-2008 09:32
My heart still with her
Never dulled by the silence
Until death parts us
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Alisha Matova
Too Old; Do Not Want!
Join date: 8 Mar 2007
Posts: 583
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12-28-2008 09:40
implacable bride
raining, battering bobtail
hissing, strongly, coy
(sorry having an off morning, great thread though, will be back when my attitude changes)
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LittleMe Jewell
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Join date: 8 Oct 2007
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12-28-2008 09:46
From: Rudolph Ormsby My heart still with her
Never dulled by the silence
Until death parts us Some cannot let go Feeling anguish forever Maybe it is time
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Rudolph Ormsby
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12-28-2008 09:46
Moments like these lost
As tears in the summer rain
Melt upon my skin
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Amaranthim Talon
Voyager, Seeker, Curious
Join date: 14 Nov 2006
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12-28-2008 10:21
From: Alisha Matova implacable bride
raining, battering bobtail
hissing, strongly, coy
(sorry having an off morning, great thread though, will be back when my attitude changes) This is really in keeping with the haiku spirit since traditionally it shd have a hint of nature in it- then what season u choose to display gives it the tone as of light or sadness.
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Amaranthim Talon
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12-28-2008 10:21
From: Rudolph Ormsby Moments like these lost
As tears in the summer rain
Melt upon my skin I like this one best.
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Rudolph Ormsby
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12-28-2008 10:28
From: LittleMe Jewell Some cannot let go
Feeling anguish forever
Maybe it is time Forever shortened Cold steel weeps upon cold steel Time feels no sorrow |
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Marianne McCann
Feted Inner Child
Join date: 23 Feb 2006
Posts: 7,145
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12-28-2008 11:49
I did a number of haiku inspired by Second Life...
It was unforseen
We cannot connect you now
Try again later
You have been logged out
All your IMs can be read
But you are not there
Why does my prim drift?
Lag can be a harsh mistress
And it is Sunday
Despite best efforts
You can not log in right now
The poor hamster died
No water ripples
My computer is too slow
Shaders are all off
In the casino
The Gorean ageplayer
closed their bank account
I have ten Lindens
Twenty-one hours in a chair
I play "Second Life"
I has a prim kitty
She once made me a cookie
But she ated it.
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Rudolph Ormsby
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Join date: 31 Oct 2006
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12-28-2008 11:53
From: Marianne McCann I did a number of haiku inspired by Second Life...
It was unforseen
We cannot connect you now
Try again later
You have been logged out
All your IMs can be read
But you are not there
Why does my prim drift?
Lag can be a harsh mistress
And it is Sunday
Despite best efforts
You can not log in right now
The poor hamster died
No water ripples
My computer is too slow
Shaders are all off
In the casino
The Gorean ageplayer
closed their bank account
I have ten Lindens
Twenty-one hours in a chair
I play "Second Life"
I has a prim kitty
She once made me a cookie
But she ated it. LOL! ... .. . Desert heat brings sleep Summer rocks break into sand Desert night sparks bright |
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Rudolph Ormsby
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Join date: 31 Oct 2006
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12-28-2008 13:14
From: LittleMe Jewell Some cannot let go
Feeling anguish forever
Maybe it is time You are right. It is time. The final haiku from me, with hope for peace for all possible futures: Morning emptiness Herald a New Peace for all! Bright Future from Dawn |
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George Standish
Your Friend!
Join date: 12 Aug 2006
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12-28-2008 18:52
 LittleMe! Great, quick reply! Marianne! I felt to my soul, everyone one of your Haikus. |
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Puppet Shepherd
New Year, New Tricks
Join date: 14 Feb 2007
Posts: 725
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12-28-2008 19:13
The poor naked man
Is missing a vital part
No penis attached
Dancing to no beat
The noob can't find the way to
Stop animations
I sail through the air
Tumbling through time, prims and space
Region handoff failed
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Anti Antonelli
Deranged Toymaker
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12-28-2008 19:35
Wond'rous world of dreams
Fly with me through crimson skies
We can has sex now?
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Kaimi Kyomoon
Kah-EE-mee
Join date: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 5,664
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12-28-2008 19:41
From: Marianne McCann I did a number of haiku inspired by Second Life...
It was unforseen
We cannot connect you now
Try again later
You have been logged out
All your IMs can be read
But you are not there
Why does my prim drift?
Lag can be a harsh mistress
And it is Sunday
Despite best efforts
You can not log in right now
The poor hamster died
No water ripples
My computer is too slow
Shaders are all off
In the casino
The Gorean ageplayer
closed their bank account
I have ten Lindens
Twenty-one hours in a chair
I play "Second Life"
I has a prim kitty
She once made me a cookie
But she ated it. Haiku as well as Fireworks pictures and buildings Creative Mari
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Jezebella Desmoulins
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12-28-2008 21:09
It sucks when you are
Writing a haiku and you
Run out of sylla-
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Sindy Tsure
Will script for shoes
Join date: 18 Sep 2006
Posts: 4,103
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12-28-2008 22:40
I made an object
It drops sheep when people chat
Amused to no end
(LOL @ Marianne! Very, very good!!)
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Marianne McCann
Feted Inner Child
Join date: 23 Feb 2006
Posts: 7,145
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12-28-2008 22:44
Thanks, everybuggy
Especially liked the haiku
We're all inventive!
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Cappy Frantisek
Open Source is the Devil!
Join date: 27 Oct 2006
Posts: 400
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12-29-2008 06:43
Loading new server
An end to the abusers
Corporate SL
~gong~
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Pie Psaltery
runs w/scissors
Join date: 13 Jan 2004
Posts: 987
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12-29-2008 06:52
Inspired more by recent threads on the forums here:
The SL Forums
Land of the Grammer Nazis
Arguing nothings
Punctuation points
Vehemently defended
While losing insight
I am right, you're wrong
I can prove it to my own
Full satisfaction
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Puppet Shepherd
New Year, New Tricks
Join date: 14 Feb 2007
Posts: 725
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12-29-2008 08:02
I think it would be fun to start responding to other threads in haiku, for example:
You're leaving SL
Full of theives, cheats and liars
Can I have your stuff?
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Kaimi Kyomoon
Kah-EE-mee
Join date: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 5,664
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12-29-2008 12:12
You say you are new
And you want to remove now
The box on your head
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MadKitty Aabye
Noob Petter
Join date: 11 Oct 2007
Posts: 21
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12-29-2008 14:21
Look at me closely
In a passionate embrace,
My hair disappears.
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