Cute Machinima Movie with Dragons

Hey there, hope this is the right category to post my new video on blip.tv
Its a lil story about my protagonist Laurina, who is seeking for the answer to life, universe and all the rest. And the answer is NOT 42 this time ^^

Hope you'll enjoy it and gimme some feedback. Finally I found out, how to switch off the GUI!
lol

here ya go:

http://blip.tv/file/1763403

thank you for the audience

Laurina

Hi Laurina,

I'm surprised that you have made so few posts here. Clearly you know how to make movies from a visual perspective. The composition, angles, lighting, editing, all flawless.

I found the use of such large text, especially the ticker tape effect at the begining, served only to distract my view. Or I could ignore the text and just watch the rich visuals, which by halfway through, I did.

I would suggest keeping dialogue at a seperate area of the screen, to the speech. You added some great music and ambient sounds, wonder why you didn't use a voice over for the narration, leaving text for speech interaction.

Despite my comments, I enjoyed the movie, it was excellent quality in many ways.