Filipe Connor Movies

Hi, im a lover of machinimas ive started doing them some time ago, but only recentely i found this forum and ii guess is a good way to share my movies.

Here some of my movies:

Live in Death - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQqPqWdCe9U

The top of the Hill - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KeJIMVsLHks

Failed Rescue - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uT8cr4AWHsc

i hope u like

Hi Filipe, good to see you on the forums.

If you are looking for feedback, good or bad, then please read on, if not, then simply jump this post.

I like what you are doing.. its clear, has quality, but its on the edge of boring.
First movie. Seemed to get mixed up with the definition between Love and Sex... the guy humping her in every scene, doesn't do the 'love thing'. The scenes could have moved about a bit more, otherwise they come across as a CCTV camera (peeping tom). I turnned it off after the long scene of the burning car and the body.. too long...

Second Movie.. good scenes, well panned, clear and quality.. too long again. Try more cut scenes. Music when showing the tepees was Celtic.... When actors are interacting, always do a closeup, either use lipsyncing and floating text, or voiceovers. If you want some Indian war chants, I can email you some. The last scene would have worked with a panning away shot.

Third movie. 1 1/2 minutes into the movie, I dont know why the guy parachuted in, or is stood on a roof doing nothing... Finding out he has no amo... hmm, maybe gun jammed... that works. He beats off zombies and a rabid dog, just so he could wash his hands and stand about outside the toilets?

I'm not saying any of this because I don't like your work... quite the contrary, I like what you are doing, the camera angles are some of the best I've seen. I do so because I hope you look at the movies again and see what others see, and not your babies
All three of these movies have good potential, and I hope you continue making more.

thanks i apreciatte the comment and suggestion

I sincerely hope I have not put you off either, making more movies and or posting here on the forums with your work. I really would like to see more.

i will post more when i make new ones. thanks