Second Life Forums Archive - The Ring of Fire

Josey Trautman

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Join date: 6 Feb 2007

Posts: 50

09-22-2008 18:12

Open to critics and suggestions.
Available on YouTube and Blip TV, please watch it on Blip Tv not full screen, YouTube quality makes me cry after all the weeks I have been working on this.

Blip Tv
http://blip.tv/file/1285559

YouTube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wLBS2Ywkw5Y

Infrared Wind

Gridologist

Join date: 7 Jan 2007

Posts: 662

09-22-2008 18:28

I like it, especially the pan from moon/nightsky to the campfire.

- Infrared

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AWM Mars

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09-22-2008 21:24

My first thoughts were 'Blazing Saddles', and YES! there it was, had to play it 3 times, at 43 seconds.. a definate passing of gas.... lol.. same at the end...

Good direction/editing... maybe some ambient sounds like crickets, crackling of the fire wouldn't have gone amiss... but very smooth flycam shots...excellent

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Sayden Westland

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09-23-2008 09:27

Sound effects are great, and the pans are smooth, I also think the quality on YouTube is not so bad at all.

The scene you built is wonderful, love the guy with the hiccups. I was just waiting to see the gun go off from the guy sleeping and everybody jump, hahah..

Nice scene, nice pans, great soundeffects

Josey Trautman

Registered User

Join date: 6 Feb 2007

Posts: 50

Thank you

09-25-2008 17:55

For comments.
A while ago i promised i was going to use some features to shot machinimas, some scripts and products that are on sale on slexchange but i did not yet. This machinima was special to me because i built myself almost everything, from the hats to the rocks and cactus and the burning logs, the animations, the bible, the bandido and the preacher reading the bible clothes. I worked a lot on textures and sculpties, and even if keeping it simple i wanted it to look great, so I hope it worked.

Now, did anyone use this? http://www.slexchange.com/modules.php?name=Marketplace&file=item&ItemID=694737

if yes please write ur impressions

Thanx and i'll get back soon with more machinima!

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The Ring of Fire - New Machinima clip

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Josey Trautman Registered User Join date: 6 Feb 2007 Posts: 50	09-22-2008 18:12 Open to critics and suggestions. Available on YouTube and Blip TV, please watch it on Blip Tv not full screen, YouTube quality makes me cry after all the weeks I have been working on this. Blip Tv http://blip.tv/file/1285559 YouTube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wLBS2Ywkw5Y
Infrared Wind Gridologist Join date: 7 Jan 2007 Posts: 662	09-22-2008 18:28 I like it, especially the pan from moon/nightsky to the campfire. - Infrared _____________________
AWM Mars Scarey Dude :¬) Join date: 10 Apr 2004 Posts: 3,398	09-22-2008 21:24 My first thoughts were 'Blazing Saddles', and YES! there it was, had to play it 3 times, at 43 seconds.. a definate passing of gas.... lol.. same at the end... Good direction/editing... maybe some ambient sounds like crickets, crackling of the fire wouldn't have gone amiss... but very smooth flycam shots...excellent _____________________ * Politeness is priceless when received, cost nothing to own or give, yet many cannot afford - Why do you only see typo's AFTER you have clicked submit? http://www.wba-advertising.com http://www.nex-core-mm.com http://www.eml-entertainments.com http://www.v-innovate.com
Sayden Westland Registered User Join date: 3 Jun 2008 Posts: 67	09-23-2008 09:27 Sound effects are great, and the pans are smooth, I also think the quality on YouTube is not so bad at all. The scene you built is wonderful, love the guy with the hiccups. I was just waiting to see the gun go off from the guy sleeping and everybody jump, hahah.. Nice scene, nice pans, great soundeffects
Josey Trautman Registered User Join date: 6 Feb 2007 Posts: 50	Thank you 09-25-2008 17:55 For comments. A while ago i promised i was going to use some features to shot machinimas, some scripts and products that are on sale on slexchange but i did not yet. This machinima was special to me because i built myself almost everything, from the hats to the rocks and cactus and the burning logs, the animations, the bible, the bandido and the preacher reading the bible clothes. I worked a lot on textures and sculpties, and even if keeping it simple i wanted it to look great, so I hope it worked. Now, did anyone use this? http://www.slexchange.com/modules.php?name=Marketplace&file=item&ItemID=694737 if yes please write ur impressions Thanx and i'll get back soon with more machinima!