Garbage Prototype
Random Fashions
Join date: 20 Jul 2004
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04-01-2008 07:14
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u5f4xlvkQ5c&fmt=18 thought id share 
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Infrared Wind
Gridologist
Join date: 7 Jan 2007
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04-01-2008 18:39
Nice work. I like the production using masks and multiple videos panning. I need to try that sometime.
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AWM Mars
Scarey Dude :¬)
Join date: 10 Apr 2004
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04-02-2008 06:49
It is a good concept. My only negative comment is the randomness of it. The eye has to flick about all over the screen too quickly to take in the content, as soon as you focus on one inset, another flashes onto the screen, making you loose focus. Try making the 2d's move slowly while you take more time with the movie inset movement. Cross fading or use a picture swapping transition over say 1-2 seconds might help you there. I did like what I saw and the execution was a first, which itself deserves high merit. I did produce a 26 mask layered movie some months ago in the form of a digital comic for a designer, but we fell out and it was never published. Seeing what you have done here, makes me want to drag it out of mothballs and re-brand it, so we can use it as a promo. 
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Garbage Prototype
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04-02-2008 15:36
Infrared - Thanks!
AWM - Yeah the thing is I made the short ad pretty quick in about 5 hours or so and didnt realize the flaws untill I watched it on youtube and I totaly agree too much is going on and its pretty quick. This is my second time making a video and still learning how to use vegas im such a noob at it haha ive had it for about three months so far, but thanks for the suggestion i'll defintly put it to use in my third! By the way you should finish that movie sounds really cool!
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