My first Music video

Let me know what u think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8BO2Y_8U4wo

If that was your first..... you are way ahead of many.....

I would offer some thoughts...

Use the environment editor and play with the lighting settings.
see here for my comments:
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You can acheive some spectacular results in your movies, using just some simple settings.

Try not to shoot against a plain horizon, it has a habbit of visually cutting the scene in half, drawing the eye away from its primary focus.... although I would admit, it didn't mine for long lol.

Use an equaliser to take some of the boom from the music. My system will play down to 20htz, but fuzzed that track, so try reducing it slightly.

None of the above is being critic, just some suggestions for your next movies, which I shall look forward to, as I did watching this one