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Nick Fairlight
Humanoid Typhoon
Join date: 19 Jun 2003
Posts: 494
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02-26-2004 21:36
*Jazzy low beat plays in the backround with bongo drums*
What is the goldfish?
What is it's meaning?
Nothing...nothing to us...nothing in our eyes
A simple shake of a bag of food...
A simple laugh at it's funny face...
and off to other things...
it sits there...
it sits in it's castle...
doing nothing...
nothing...
nothing...
A mistake you say?
to lazy?
to tired?
don't care?
yes...
your mistake put it's life in jeopardy...
it lays there...
floating...
motionless...
A simple funeral...
"The Flush"
down it goes...
to it's watery heaven...
You watch as it goes down the toilet...staring...
not caring...
you leave to do better things...
Just another fish in the sea you say?
Just another fish down the toilet I say...
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Ok, sad attempt at writing some kind of poem...
Comments?
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Einsman Schlegel
Disenchanted Fool
Join date: 11 Jun 2003
Posts: 1,461
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02-26-2004 21:38
Id rather be flushed down the toilet than eaten alive.
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Nick Fairlight
Humanoid Typhoon
Join date: 19 Jun 2003
Posts: 494
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02-26-2004 21:38
Bah...not the point =P
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I tried to find a topic, but I kept getting distracted by that slightly offensive photo of Arnold.
-Jeska Linden
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Oz Spade
ReadsNoPostLongerThanHand
Join date: 23 Sep 2003
Posts: 2,708
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02-26-2004 22:16
I liked it! Do they really have a 3 second memory? If you think LSL is hard... man would that suck. "AAAHH Where am I?!" "Oh I'm a fish!" "Aaaahhh Where am I?!" etc. But I liked it! Good writing. 
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Devlin Gallant
Thought Police
Join date: 18 Jun 2003
Posts: 5,948
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02-27-2004 02:58
*Snaps his fingers in applause*
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I LIKE children, I've just never been able to finish a whole one.
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