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Darwin Appleby
I Was Beaten With Satan
Join date: 14 Mar 2003
Posts: 2,779
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06-14-2004 17:09
Ok, this is very, very important! Well, maybe not, but I love attention.
What do you guys think of the attached piece? Any suggestions? Thank ya kindly.
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Garoad Kuroda
Prophet of Muppetry
Join date: 5 Sep 2003
Posts: 2,989
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06-14-2004 20:28
It's not bad--any way to make the water look a little different? That's what I'd focus on if you're going to change anything.
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WTF is C3PO supposed to be USEFUL for anyway, besides whining? Stupid piece of scrap metal would be more useful recycled as a toaster. But even that would suck, because who would want to listen to a whining wussy toaster? Is he gold plated? If that's the case he should just be melted down into gold ingots. Help the economy some, and stop being so damn useless you stupid bucket of bolts! R2 is 1,000 times more useful than your tin man ass, and he's shaped like a salt and pepper shaker FFS!
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James Miller
Village Idiot
Join date: 9 Jan 2003
Posts: 1,500
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06-14-2004 20:30
It actually makes me feel a bit sick. There is no horizon. It makes me feel like the room is spinning. I feel like I'm going to drown. For some reason, the image of teletubbies smothering me comes to mind.
These are just the first things that come to mind. They aren't good or bad...they just are.
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Beryl Greenacre
Big Scaredy-Baby
Join date: 24 Jun 2003
Posts: 1,312
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06-14-2004 20:34
Whoa, the switch from the dark SL forums to this bright picture just about blinded me! The sky and clouds are well done, but overall it's a bit too bright. Like James said, maybe make a distinction between the water and the horizon, and I'd darken the water and or part of the sky a bit, so there's some contrast. Technically, it looks great, Darwin, I just think it needs some aesthetic tweaking. 
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Wednesday Grimm
Ex Libris
Join date: 9 Jan 2003
Posts: 934
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06-15-2004 07:28
I like it, but the sky looks to clean compared to the water, but I'd say the opposite of Garoad, I would give the sky more pointilism. But, on the other hand, you can't make art via comittee.
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Julian Fate
80's Pop Star
Join date: 19 Oct 2003
Posts: 1,020
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06-15-2004 10:09
James, being smothered by Teletubbies is always bad. Period. I'd like to see more variety in the secondary clouds. The hazy horizon doesn't bother me. Also, it would be nice for the main cloud to be larger and more defined. |
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Del Dayton
British Beer Guzzler
Join date: 12 Dec 2003
Posts: 157
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06-15-2004 16:27
I like it. It's got potential for being the default wallpaper of the next version of Windows  |