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Adena Sontse
Registered User
Join date: 16 Sep 2006
Posts: 2
02-15-2007 12:26
I understand the little blurb of text that you have to agree to to enter the event posting page.. But I was wondering if there was a resource of words that aren't allowed? I'm getting the yellow warning for my event descriptions.. and I can't figure out why...

AN EXAMPLE THAT GETS A YELLOW WARNING MESSAGE & WON'T BE POSTED:

Leather & Lace

NC-17 is hosting back-to-back events tonight, Feb. 15, from 3 to 9 PM SL time. We want you to come dressed in your finest to watch the finest. Erotic Dancers and Escorts perform on our stages. Whether you enjoy the tight comfort of a second leathery skin, the soft caress of delicate lace or merely enjoy a lovely feast for your senses… You’ll not want to miss out.

We’re handing out CASH prizes to the best dressed. Other, non-monetary, prizes will be awarded throughout the night as well; you’ll just have to come check us to see exactly what those prizes may be.

NC-17 is a little experiment attempting to combine the pleasures of the virtual flesh with the more titillating stimulation that comes from the tickling of the more intellectual organ. We're an odd combination of Club / Art Gallery / Brothel, attempting to create a one of a kind atmosphere in SL. One where people come for thought provoking conversation, eye candy of all sorts, and most importantly, a good time.


AN EXAMPLE THAT GETS THE OK AND IS ABLE TO BE POSTED:

Leather & Lace Event @ NC-17

Feb. 15th - 3-6 & 3-9 PM

Come dressed in your finest to watch the finest...

Adult Entertainment ( Dancers & Escorts)

NC-17 = Club / Art Gallery / Brothel
Cher Harrington
Audio Consultant
Join date: 2 Jul 2005
Posts: 154
02-15-2007 13:53
I have the same thing....even though it says its under the minimum number of words, it's too long. I cut out a paragraph or a sentence or two at a time, and keep re-submitting until it takes.